[ncc-services-wg] DNSMON policy proposal change
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Ondřej Surý
ondrej.sury at nic.cz
Mon Oct 8 11:37:10 CEST 2007
Peter Koch píše v Čt 04. 10. 2007 v 15:04 +0200: > On Thu, Oct 04, 2007 at 01:00:07PM +0200, OndÅ?ej SurÃœ wrote: > > > policy. I am also attaching new document (ripe-342-1.txt), and diff > > between this and current policy (ripe-342.diff). > > judging from previous discussion I do not expect much controversy on the > overall direction, so hopefully touching upon wording isn't premature: > > > +0. Definitions > > + > > + a. TLD: Top Level Domain, as recorded by the IANA. > > + > > + b. ENUM domain: Delegated domain corresponding to E.164 country codes, > > + as delegated by RIPE NCC. > > + > > + b. TLD Administrator: The organisation(s) responsible for the registry > > + of a TLD or ENUM domain. > > I'm not too comfortable seeing the term "TLD" extended into ENUM land. > Also, even if "Tier 0/1/2" usually denotes the registry instead of the > domain or zone, we should speak of ENUM Tier 1 domains, just as we - on purpose - > say "TLD" instead of "Domain". The term "delegated" in (b), while technically > perfectly OK, might undergo the same polishing applied to (a). I tried to change as few words as possible. We could change b) and c) to: a. TLD: A Top Level Domain, as recorded by the IANA. b. ENUM Tier-1 domain: A delegated domain corresponding to E.164 country code, as delegated by RIPE NCC. c. Administrator: The organisation(s) responsible for the registry of a TLD or ENUM Tier-1 domain. > > * the Test Box Hosts, > > - * the operators of the root servers and TLD servers, > > + * the operators of the root servers, TLD and ENUM domain servers, > > * the Internet community in general. > > ENUM Tier1 Domain name servers, similar below ... * the operators of the root servers, TLD and ENUM Tier-1 domain servers, > > 3.1. Definitions > > > > - a. TLD Administrator: The organisation(s) responsible for the > > - registry of a Top Level Domain, as recorded by the IANA. > > + a. TLD: Top Level Domain, as recorded by the IANA, or delegated domain > > + corresponding to E.164 country code, as delegated by RIPE NCC. > > This definition collides with the one provided 0.a. As stated above, we > should keep the distinction of TLD and ENUM Tier 1. Maybe we could replace TLD with something like "Monitored Domain"? Again I tried to change as few words as possible. Replacing all "TLD" with "TLD and ENUM Tier-1 domain" doesn't improve readability of the document (and the contract) at all. Ondrej. -- Ondřej Surý technický ředitel/Chief Technical Officer ----------------------------------------- CZ.NIC, z.s.p.o. -- .cz domain registry Americká 23,120 00 Praha 2,Czech Republic mailto:ondrej.sury at nic.cz http://nic.cz/ sip:ondrej.sury at nic.cz tel:+420.222745110 mob:+420.739013699 fax:+420.222745112 -----------------------------------------
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